Assignment 22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3
I unfortunately did not receive any feedback on the last
elevator pitch that I uploaded to my blog. Some self-criticism that I can
provide myself with is to speak clearer and slower, enunciate your words, and
try not to stutter when speaking. If I can fix these issues in my elevator
pitches, I would be able to better myself and present myself better as a whole.
After completing the third elevator pitch, I can say that I have my script
almost memorized. There are a few things that I would like to change to it, but
overall, I believe that it is strong. I can also admit to being very
comfortable in front of a camera after completing all three of my elevator
pitches. Overall, from my first elevator pitch to my third elevator pitch, I
can truly say that I have improved my style and techniques and I cannot wait to
apply them to real-life situations.
Hi Alexandra! I really liked your pitch, especially at the beginning since it’s basically a truth and very relatable. The only criticisms I can provide is that your dress wasn’t professional and that I think you could’ve used more vocal inflections to seem more energetic and into your product and also project a sense of urgency of how dangerous radiation from our cellphones can be. Other than that, great job!
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